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Title: Is Spring Approaching?
Author: missthingsplace
Parings/characters: Jack, Ianto, Gwen, Tosh, Owen
Disclaimer: I don't own Torchwood or any of the characters ... unfortunately.
Summary: Jack's back ...
Spoilers: KKBB
Warnings: None
Rating: g

Written for day three of the [info]redismycolour Winter Challenge

A/N I found this prompt really really hard and i'm still not sure about this ...

Jack was stood in his office, hands in his trouser pockets looking down into the hub below. They had told him he had been away three months but he knew better, he knew it was a year but he didn't tell them.

They were all angry with him, for leaving them without saying a word and for now he couldn't tell them where he had been and why.

The memories were too fresh and painful, he wondered if they would forgive him anyway. There had been no time to talk, as soon as he had come back he was thrust into the action.

Ianto had agreed to go on a date with him, that was something. If anything he thought he would have been the most angry with him, but apparently that was Gwen from the way she had reacted earlier.

Tosh just seemed happy to have him back, Owen as usual was acting like he didn't give a toss but Jack knew him better than that.

They weren't ignoring him but there was a definite chill in the air, but he could feel it slowly dissipating.

That whole year was like winter, the days dark and long but strangely it seemed now, fleeting. As Ianto walked up towards his office carrying his coffee mug he thought that maybe his winter was finally over and spring was approaching.

The End.

Date: 2009-02-04 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Thank you, it took me ages to write this tiny fic ...

Date: 2009-02-04 07:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com
liked that, lovely

Date: 2009-02-04 07:59 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-04 08:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com
OH I think this one is lovely - comparing Ianto to spring there at the end...made me smile :)

Date: 2009-02-04 08:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Oooh that last like was driving me nuts, just couldn't get it to sound right!

Thank you :D

Date: 2009-02-04 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] slf59.livejournal.com
Very touching.

Date: 2009-02-04 08:04 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-04 08:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cjharknessgirl.livejournal.com
Lovely, I liked the comparison between Ianto and spring. :)

Date: 2009-02-04 08:29 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-04 09:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] d8rkmessngr.livejournal.com
Oh, what a perfect glimpse and analogy of Jack's thoughts!

Date: 2009-02-04 09:15 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2009-02-04 10:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wykling.livejournal.com
Aaw, don't be insecure about this.
I like it very much, especially the last line :)
this little fic is really sweet and a nice little introspective for Jack^^

Date: 2009-02-04 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
I'm insecure about everything i write but some so much more than others!

Thank you :D

Date: 2009-02-04 10:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] wykling.livejournal.com
*sighs* tell me about it xD
I'm pretty insecure about everything I write too. That's why I often scan my fics over and over again before I post them.
lol even sometimes so often that I begin to see stars and of course, after posting I find mistakes xP
But believe me, you shouldn't worry about these things, I love your fics, they are really good! :3

Date: 2009-02-04 10:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
I rewrote bits of this soooo many times ... I do the same thing, we probably all do to some extent. Thank you so much :D

Date: 2009-02-04 10:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cdixon-wales.livejournal.com
Aww! This was really sweet!!
You may be insecure bout it, but it seems everyone on here liked it! :D
Well done!

Date: 2009-02-04 10:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
So it seems, which makes me happy :)

Thank you.

Date: 2009-02-04 11:20 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bardlover6.livejournal.com
Lovely imagery and character depth.

Date: 2009-02-04 11:24 pm (UTC)

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Date: 2009-02-05 01:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trektotorch.livejournal.com
Lovely. Really liked this short story.

Date: 2009-02-05 01:58 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-05 04:24 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] carinas-carinae.livejournal.com
This is very nice. I would say you did good. :-D

Date: 2009-02-05 09:38 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-05 03:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] scottishwillow.livejournal.com
I agree with everyone here - this is lovely.

Date: 2009-02-05 03:44 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-06 10:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etmuse.livejournal.com
Nice introspective :)

Date: 2009-02-06 11:02 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-25 01:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bandgeek01.livejournal.com
I think this was cute :)


Date: 2009-02-25 04:14 pm (UTC)


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