ext_274621 (
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2009-06-29 07:19 pm (UTC)
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Fantastic ending!
One writing thing I noticed:
With in a few minutes Martha handed Jack back to her daddies.
I'm guessing you mean handing Saffir back to her daddies?
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One writing thing I noticed:
With in a few minutes Martha handed Jack back to her daddies.
I'm guessing you mean handing Saffir back to her daddies?