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missthingsplace ([personal profile] missthingsplace) wrote2009-07-03 08:11 pm
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Secret Smile

Title: Secret Smile
Author: [info]missthingsplace
Parings/characters: Jack/Ianto
Disclaimer: I don't own Torchwood or any of the characters ... unfortunately, just borrowing them for a while.
Summary: A little scene set after the BBC4 Radio Play 'The Dead Line'
Warnings: Spoilers for the above mentioned.
Rating: pg

“You never will just be a blip in time Ianto Jones. Not for me.”

Eyes wide Ianto was stunned into silence for a minute or two, staring at Jack as he gulped, trying to form the words he wanted to say.

“I, you heard ... every ... word?” Ianto managed to stutter after what seemed like a lifetime.

“It seems you can be pretty talkative when the mood strikes.” Jack smiled.

That smile, Ianto thought, the smile he keeps for me alone. His secret smile, reserved for the person he loves. The smile he knows that can distract me, from anything and everything. He knew that the smile had been someone elses once, Jack had loved so many people, but for now it was his and his alone and that was all that counted.

“Well, it's hard to get a word in edgewise normally Jack.” Ianto quipped in an attempt to change the subject.

“You have no idea just what I feel for you do you Ianto?” Jack asked, continuing before Ianto could answer. “You dominate my dreams, I dream of us being together for long years to come. I hope that Torchwood doesn't take you away from me too soon, if I leave I will always come back to you. Always. Or take you with me, you need to see the universe for yourself.”

“But I'll grow old, grey, you'll get bored with me long before then.” Ianto replied sadly.

“No.” Jack shook his head slowly, smiling that smile again. “You're mine for as long as I have you.”

“Jack, I ...”

“Yeah, me too.” Jack whispered before kissing his lover softly.

The End.

[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 07:17 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely addition to the end of the radio play.

[identity profile] morgia.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 07:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Hooooooooooo Miss, this is very very lovely !!!!!

[identity profile] esporamor.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 07:26 pm (UTC)(link)
You can't possible know how happy I am that the first fic that came up from this wonderful perfect Audio Drama, was yours.

I love this.

[identity profile] cazmalfoy.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 07:31 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwwwwwwwwwww

ETA: You beat me to it.
Edited 2009-07-03 19:31 (UTC)
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[identity profile] frakkin-addict.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh I loved it. Thanks so much!!!

[identity profile] gracie-musica.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
That's totally what happened! Yup!

[identity profile] ice-elf.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 07:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, lovely addition.

I was waiting for some fics to pop up too :D

[identity profile] toottims.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 07:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Awwwww.......absolutely gorgeous. :)

[identity profile] sadera992.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 08:16 pm (UTC)(link)
aww! love it! so sweet.

cough*cannon*cough

[identity profile] fry-addict.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 08:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Wonderful addition.
Today's was by far the best radio play imho, even had tears in my eyes during Ianto's monologue. Gareth delivered that one really breathtakingly beautiful.
Edited 2009-07-03 20:31 (UTC)

[identity profile] wykling.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 09:10 pm (UTC)(link)
Aaaww, sweet little scene and Ianto's thoughts make me think of the Semisonic song^^

[identity profile] cjharknessgirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 09:39 pm (UTC)(link)
Awww this was just perfect complement to the Dead Line and I loved it!

[identity profile] michele659.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 09:43 pm (UTC)(link)
That was beautiful-Ilove the tenderness between them. I'm so happy Jack didn't just not mention what Ianto said,and the way you fleshed out the scene was very romantic.
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[identity profile] elanor12.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 10:29 pm (UTC)(link)
oh what a gorgeous addition.

During Ianto's monologue, I was crying in my kitchen. *lol* My mom was like : "What? What's going on? Who's talking? What is he saying??? I don't understand!" while I was doing some signal to her to stop talking, I'll explain later.
Gareth is such a brilliant actor.

[identity profile] kikigirl.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 10:30 pm (UTC)(link)
If only this was how the play ended! Very beautiful!

[identity profile] amcpep.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 10:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Loved Dead Line, lots of lovely Janto and references to the 70's (we used to have a phone like that, though it was a horrible yellow sort of colour) - and am re-listening to it as I write. I loved Ianto talking to Jack, it was so open and that final bit? I walked down to pick my son up from school and couldn't stop grinning everytime I thought of it!
This fic is a lovely addition to the play. Thank you. :)

[identity profile] griffinmaxwell.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 11:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I almost died from squeeling when I finished the radio-play because of that line. This made it 100x sweeter.

[identity profile] bandgeek01.livejournal.com 2009-07-03 11:27 pm (UTC)(link)
fantastic. This is what I imagined their conversation would have continued on with.


Nicole
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[identity profile] pinkfairy727.livejournal.com 2009-07-04 12:45 am (UTC)(link)
AWWWW! Adorable, I would have loved to see that scene extended but that was just a brilliant last line to end on :c)

[identity profile] trektotorch.livejournal.com 2009-07-04 12:55 am (UTC)(link)
Just lovely!! The radio play really showed the relationship between Janto. Ianto's talk to a coma Jack was very moving and telling. I loved how Jack was able to use the "blip" to let Ianto know that he had heard him. You story was a perfect added ending scene to that.

[identity profile] mrsalemp.livejournal.com 2009-07-04 01:57 am (UTC)(link)
I loved the parting line in the radio play, but what you added is just lovely. Excellent :)

[identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com 2009-07-04 03:07 am (UTC)(link)
Oh that was gorgeous. What a lovely addition to that RP *happy sigh* *still basking in the Jantoy goodness*

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