So sweet! Whew. Well done, too. This chapter really works. I like the way you spaced out Jack and Toshiko from Jack and Ianto. I also really like your Owen in this. Here's my favorite line:

“Not if it's going to endanger your health and the life of your unborn baby it isn't.” Owen told him firmly. “I wasn't kidding when I threatened to keep you apart, now get on the examination table.”

:D