Torn 35/?

Nov. 26th, 2008 04:24 pm
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Title: Torn - Sequel to Be Careful What You Wish For
Author: missthingsplace
Parings/characters: Jack/Ianto, Gwen, My OC's: Damien and Chloe, Martha, UNIT
Disclaimer: I don't own Torchwood or any of the characters ... unfortunately.
Summary: Set after series two
Spoilers: None
Warnings: Mentions of Mpreg, angst, language, TORTURE
Rating: PG13 - NC17 For series.

Previous series (Mothers Day/Celebrations/One Week In Cardiff/Heaven and Hell/Be Careful What You Wish For) can be found here: Fic Master List: http://missthingsplace.livejournal.com/1
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Ianto's eyes grew wide as the colonel approached holding what looked like a cattle prod and placed one end against his chest.

“So, what is Jack?” He asked as he then unzipped Ianto's jumpsuit and placed it against his bare skin.

“As human as me and you ... well me anyway.” Ianto replied.

“Ah well, I don't believe that as there's something different with his DNA and something is happening to yours too.”

“Then your test results must be wrong.” Ianto stated trying to ignore the cold metal against his skin.

“So, who's the mother of the twins?”

“A surrogate.”

“Then how come neither yours nor Jack's DNA match that of the babies, surely one of you is the father?”

“None of your business.”

The colonel pressed a button on the device in his hand and a bolt of pain shot through Ianto's chest and spread through his body, Ianto cried out in pain and was left panting for breath as it began to subside.

“Fucking bastard.” Ianto managed to gasp.

“Oh I've only just started. You may as well just tell me what I want to know.”

“Not going to happen.” Ianto told him resolutely.

The colonel pressed the button again, Ianto's body barely recovered from the first time and he screamed as it seemed to hurt more than it did the first time and he had to resist hard as the feeling of wanting to pass out overcame him.

“Shit.” Was all he could manage to get out.

Ianto watched helplessly as the colonel put down the object and picked up another.

“This may hurt a little more, it's going to take samples from your body. Made the Captain pass out, how about you? You strong enough to stay conscious?”

Ianto couldn't help it as his fear showed on his face, if it had made Jack pass out he knew he would do so too. The colonel held it out over his body and smirked, his eyes gleaming with the pleasue he was getting from what he was about to do.

“Ready?” The colonel asked as he turned it on.

As Ianto screamed the cell door flew open and four people rushed in.

“Put. It. Down.” Jack ordered.

TBC

Yes, i am greedy and would love even more Christmas prompts if you can think of any and post here:
 http://missthingsplace.livejournal.com/121341.html

Date: 2008-11-26 04:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bandgeek01.livejournal.com
My heart is pounding. Holy crap.


Nicole

Date: 2008-11-26 04:41 pm (UTC)

Date: 2008-11-26 04:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bookwrm89.livejournal.com
*whimpers* More soon? Please??????

Date: 2008-11-26 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
If i get time, maybe later ... if not, tomorrow!

Thank you :D

Date: 2008-11-26 04:47 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] taffimai.livejournal.com
Yay, Jack! Also, left you some prompts.

Date: 2008-11-26 04:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Yep, they got there in the end ..

Will go seek out the prompts!

Thank you :D

Date: 2008-11-26 04:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com
Jack to the rescue.

Date: 2008-11-26 04:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Oh yeah!

Thank you :D

Date: 2008-11-26 05:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] oc-pixie.livejournal.com
Oh thank GOD! I didn't think they'd get there in time!

Date: 2008-11-26 05:14 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Just ...

Thank you :D

Date: 2008-11-26 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etmuse.livejournal.com
I almost want the nasty colonel NOT to put it down so the team have an excuse to beat the crap out of him...

Date: 2008-11-26 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Oh wait and see ...

Thank you :D

Objection!

Date: 2008-11-26 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teamrodent.livejournal.com
Taking them out of happy home is excuse enough!

Objection!

Date: 2008-11-26 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] teamrodent.livejournal.com
Taking them out of their happy home is excuse enough!

Date: 2008-11-26 05:50 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] angstosaur.livejournal.com
this is the first thing I read after getting home (ten minutes ago!)...love it :-)

Date: 2008-11-26 06:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
So happy you liked :D

Thankies :D

Date: 2008-11-26 05:57 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stargazer60.livejournal.com
Can I say YAY!! yet????

Sic 'em Jack!!! Give that asshole what he deserves!!

Date: 2008-11-26 06:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Oh yes!

Thank you :D

Date: 2008-11-26 06:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] schnuckel.livejournal.com
Jack is going to kill him.
Right, so yes, more? =P

Date: 2008-11-26 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Highly likely ...

Thanks :D

Date: 2008-11-26 06:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mizzclara.livejournal.com
JACK TO THE RESCUE!

=] =] =]

Date: 2008-11-26 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Oh yeah!

Thanks :D

Date: 2008-11-26 06:40 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] totallytracy.livejournal.com
The chances of me getting away from my family and to a computer tomorrow are slim to none.....I hope I get to see my DASHING CAPTAIN JACK to the rescue later today.....

Date: 2008-11-26 06:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Not written yet, maybe ...

Thank you :D

Date: 2008-11-26 06:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] amyross.livejournal.com
Oh, phew! Glad he was up to the test, though. (One day there's going to be an awesome, fantastic hero who just cracks under the slightest pain. Like I would ;))

I'm very glad they came in at that moment, but I'm also very interested to see how this all pans out. Rescuing the boys and the babies won't make all the problems go away ...

Still loving this :D

Date: 2008-11-26 06:59 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Nope, it won't ... but there will be some good come out of the test results that Damien has saved!

Thank you :D

Date: 2008-11-26 07:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r2d2antics.livejournal.com
Just cos someone asked you to torture ianto,ya didn't have to go and do it! never crossed my mind till the colonel said it to ianto,the team were a bit too thorough in their altering of the DNA samples.

Date: 2008-11-26 07:15 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
*grins*

I was going to anyway ... my plot bunnies just got a little more evil than i intended!

Yep, that caused a little problem on it's own.

Thank you :D

Date: 2008-11-26 07:34 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cjharknessgirl.livejournal.com
Omg, *wibble*. More please?

Date: 2008-11-26 07:39 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Writing next chapter now ... instead of starting on xmas fix like i was meant to be doing!

Thank you :D

Date: 2008-11-26 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trektotorch.livejournal.com
Yes--some kick (blank) butt coming!! Remember, that was a question I asked you about the surrogate-why the DNA of the babes couldn't at least match Ianto or Jack. Probably more safe to match Ianto--but who knows with his DNA changing. I see the next chapter is up--on to reading.

Date: 2008-11-26 08:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Damien just changed both the DNA results without thinking ... which wasn't as good idea at all and caused the colonel to become even more interested in them.

Thank you :D

Date: 2008-11-26 10:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] blucougar.livejournal.com
Is there any way at all to bribe you to post another chapter???? *looks imploringly* Nearly two days, hardly any updates from anyone, and then you go and end a chapter there!!!!
So good, though. I can't wait to see what Jack does to that bastard. Killing is way too good for him.

Date: 2009-04-19 02:19 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
*is wondering how i missed this comment*

Hmmm ...

Date: 2009-04-19 02:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Sorry ...

Thank you :D

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