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missthingsplace ([personal profile] missthingsplace) wrote2009-01-18 03:30 pm
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Torn 92/93

Title: Torn - Sequel to Be Careful What You Wish For
Author: missthingsplace
Parings/characters: Jack/Ianto, Gwen, My OC's: Damien and Chloe, Martha, UNIT
Disclaimer: I don't own Torchwood or any of the characters ... unfortunately.
Summary: Set after series two
Spoilers: None
Warnings: Mentions of Mpreg, angst, language, TORTURE
Rating: PG13 - NC17 For series.

Previous series (Mothers Day/Celebrations/One Week In Cardiff/Heaven and Hell/Be Careful What You Wish For/First Christmas) can be found here: Fic Master List: http://missthingsplace.livejournal.com/14374.html#cutid1

The tour of the archives was finished with a visit to the modified room where Jack had given birth, it was a little dusty not having been seen to since the traumatic event but at least someone had thought to get rid of all the soiled bedding.

“If you really want me to be here with the kids now and then this would make a good nursery, and when they get a little older a playroom. Of course you'd have to put a baby gate across the door, wouldn't want them wandering off around the place as anything could happen.” Claire remarked, not mentioning that the 'anything' she was thinking of was Myfanwy flying off with them to her nest.

“That's exactly what we thought, we thought you might want to take control of what happens to it, as you'll be the one spending the time in it the most with the twins. It has a comfy chair that has barely been sat in, we can remove the bed and then you can have whatever you want, just ask.” Ianto told her.

Claire glanced about the room again, it was a good size. “A carpet would be good and some storage space for the babies things, nappies and spare clothes and the like and plenty of toys.”

“You choose, we'll pay.” Jack told her. “Now to finish the tour.”

They took her down to the huge Victorian bathroom, told her she was welcome to use the facilities anytime while she was there and that they would make sure there were locks fitted very soon.

“There are no locks?” She asked a little shocked.

“Nope, we've never really worried about privacy, usually when they're used it's just a case of us all cleaning off something nasty and alien.” Jack grinned.

“But even so, I mean, all of you ... together?” She stuttered.

“Claire, don't panic, we won't make you shower with anyone else.” Ianto assured her.

“Not unless you want to!” Jack laughed causing Ianto to roll his eyes and Jack then added that he was joking causing Claire to sigh with relief, wondering if she would ever get used to the way Jack was.

“Now, want to see an alien?” Ianto asked her.

“You have an alien, here?” Her eyes widened in surprise.

“Yep, come and meet Janet.” Jack told her.

“Janet?”

“It seemed to suit.” Jack shrugged.

The babies still snuggled against their bodies they led Claire down to the cells, as she stopped in front of the one that housed Janet her mouth formed a silent “WOW”.

“What is it?”

“We don't really know what they are called, but we call them Weevils.” Ianto told her.

“And they live in the sewers eating ... well you don't want to know.” Jack added.

“Yuck.” She wrinkled her nose. “You mean there are more of them, out there?”

“Yeah, but they rarely come out of the sewers and even more rarely attack humans.” Ianto reassured her.

She shivered. “I'll have to take your word for it.”

“Come on, lets get back up to the main hub, I'm sure these two will want feeding soon and all their stuff in in their pram. And it's warmer up there.” Jack suggested, leading the way out of the cells.

That evening, once the babies were put down for the night Claire retreated to her room with her laptop, they had told her to order whatever she wanted on-line for the babies nursery come playroom and they would foot the bill and to get it delivered to the house. Jack pulled Ianto down on the sofa and kissed him tenderly, both of them stretching out along it's length as they began to deepen it.

TBC

[identity profile] luvinthe88and20.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 03:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely update.

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :D

[identity profile] r2d2antics.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 03:45 pm (UTC)(link)
92 of 93? Noooo,don't say it's so. thank you for keeping us gripped these past few weeks or so. :)))))))

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 03:47 pm (UTC)(link)
'Fraid so ... tomorrows will bring closure to a lot of things and then the sequel will begin in ... about 2 weeks ... *hides*

Thank you :D

[identity profile] r2d2antics.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 03:49 pm (UTC)(link)
" Buuuuuut Muuuuuummmmmmm"

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 03:50 pm (UTC)(link)
LMAO!

Good job you are too far away to slap ...

[identity profile] r2d2antics.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 03:54 pm (UTC)(link)
hee hee, i will have to find a Cartman pic now :))

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 03:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Grrrr!

[identity profile] kikigirl.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 03:57 pm (UTC)(link)
"You choose, we'll pay." Wow! I loved Claire's reaction to Janet. Amazing update. :)

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 03:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :D

[identity profile] schnuckel.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
One more left! D: Ah noes, I think I might re read everything xD
This is brilliant, I love Claire. I've said that before =p
Mmm, Jack and Ianto on the sofa! ;D

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 04:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Yup, just one to go ... am writing it now for tomorrow ... then i shall be posting 'Entity' and the sequel to this, name will be revealed tomorrow, will begin in about two weeks ... there should 14 chapters of 'entity'.

Thank you so much :D

[identity profile] bandgeek01.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Almost over. Awwww. I thought for sure this one would have reached 100 parts, hahaha.

But I can't wait for all the other stuff you've got writing. Plus I have to read all your redismycolour stuff. (I try not to read anyones stuff until after I've written a prompt but I haven't gotten very far this time around).


Nicole

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:00 pm (UTC)(link)
It wasn't meant to reach 93, lol!

Yep, last chapter tomorrow, then Entity begins on Tuesday ... sequel to this should start in about 2 weeks, there should be 14 chapters of Entity ... name of sequel revealed tomorrow.

Thank you :D

[identity profile] emyrldlady.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:42 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm sad it's almost over! But looking forward to the sequel.

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, i always feel sad when something i'm writing comes to an end but it's reached it natural conclusion ... Sequel in a couple of weeks!

Thank you :D

[identity profile] mizzclara.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
92 of out 93 ??
IT CANT BE OVER TOMOROW!

I love this, Claire took everything just the right way with the whole situation.

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:56 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm afraid so ... but remember, there will be a sequel!

Claire is cool!

Tomorrows chapter is turning out to be very smutty ... maybe i should ... nah!

Thank you :D

[identity profile] oc-pixie.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 05:57 pm (UTC)(link)
So glad Claire is taking this quite well! They need a babysitter they can trust with everything.

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 06:03 pm (UTC)(link)
Claire is perfect for the job ...

Thank you :D

[identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 08:04 pm (UTC)(link)
This has been such an awesome series. I'm sorry to see it end but I definitely look forward to the sequel!! I think I love Claire..and I love them telling her to outfit the nursery any way she wants and they'll foot the bill and the ending was especially hopeful :)

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 08:08 pm (UTC)(link)
Last chapter is written ... tis very smutty and hopefully amusing! I may post it before i go to bed or first thing in the morning along with the heading for the new series as a teeny tiny taster ... well, the title and characters and a little summary!

Sequel in a couple of weeks at most ...

Thank you :D
Edited 2009-01-18 20:09 (UTC)

[identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 01:24 am (UTC)(link)
Can't wait to get to that final part...saw that it was posted :)

GAH a few weeks...

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 07:08 am (UTC)(link)
Two at most ... i want to try and get ahead with writing it, only have 4 chapters written and they are in need of some major tweaking!

[identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 07:10 am (UTC)(link)
Totally and completely understand :)

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 07:14 am (UTC)(link)
Part of the reason i wrote 'Entity' i needed to write something completely different, which is almost complete, only have a couple of chapters to write for it then i can concentrate on writing BSOB ...

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 07:21 am (UTC)(link)
*Wonders just how long DSOB will become ...*

[identity profile] etmuse.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 08:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Lovely

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 08:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :D

[identity profile] teachwriteslash.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 08:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh I will miss this story but it does seem to be drawing to a natural conclusion . . . I am looking forward to Entity and the sequel!

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 08:16 pm (UTC)(link)
I may post the final chapter before i go to bed, as it's Sunday and it's smutty ... or first thing in the morning! If i do i shall post the first chapter of Entity tomorrow evening.

Thank you :D

[identity profile] cjharknessgirl.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 08:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Aw, this was lovely and I'm going to be sad when it's finished. But I'm looking forward to the last chaper, smut maybe? And I can't wait to see what happens in the sequel. :D

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 08:41 pm (UTC)(link)
Yup, the last chapter has smut ... may post it later or first thing in the morning!

Thank you :D

[identity profile] adira-tam.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 08:55 pm (UTC)(link)
I have so enjoyed this..and the last part tomorrow...sigh.
Claire is amazing, it's all so new and outside of her "norm", but here she is working out about the room for the kids...babygate..

and to leave the two boys on the couch...thats not fair having to wait for that conclusion !!!

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 09:00 pm (UTC)(link)
Not much can shock Claire now after Jack's revelation about himself ... she is truely a gem ...

I am just so mean, hee hee ... but the next chapter doesn't continue on from the couch scene ... mawahahahaha!

Thank you :D
Edited 2009-01-18 21:00 (UTC)

[identity profile] bardlover6.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 09:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Poor Claire, not being able to tell when Jack is just joking. I love her fear that Myfanwy will eat the babies. As if she would ever take anything from Ianto.

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 09:35 pm (UTC)(link)
She's only been their nanny about 3 months and some of that they were being held captive ... she'll get used to him and Myfanwy, hee!

Thank you :D

[identity profile] stargazer60.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 09:56 pm (UTC)(link)
Wrapping up very nicely!!!

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 09:58 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :D

[identity profile] isarae.livejournal.com 2009-01-18 11:01 pm (UTC)(link)
Hehe, I loved the Claire and the shower thing.. Now. off to read the last part..

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-19 07:07 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you :D

[identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com 2009-01-20 08:13 pm (UTC)(link)
loved that!

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2009-01-20 08:16 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you :D

Kitties

[identity profile] royalladyemma.livejournal.com 2010-04-25 04:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Okay, Miss Thing, what have you done with the green kitties??? I was sure Claire would just fall in love with them!!!! Please don't tell me that they passed on - say that somehow a miracle occured and they went back thru the rift and home again??? Please?????? Melinda

Re: Kitties

[identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com 2010-04-25 08:32 pm (UTC)(link)
You'll have to wait and see ...

Thank you :D