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Title: Grey Winters Day
Author: missthingsplace
Parings/characters: Ianto, Jack
Disclaimer: I don't own Torchwood or any of the characters ... unfortunately.
Summary: Sad occasion
Spoilers: None
Warnings: Character death
Rating: g

Written for day eight of the [info]redismycolour Winter Challenge

Drabble - 100 words exactly.

They carefully walked the icy path so not to fall as the cold wind battered them with snow, it was like the weather was deliberately trying to match their mood.

Standing beside the grave Jack tried desperately to stop his teeth chattering but it was so cold it was impossible, he hoped the howling of the wind would hide the sound as he pulled the collar of his coat around his neck tighter.

As Gwen's coffin was lowered into the ground he felt Ianto's hand in his, a small spark of warmth in an otherwise sad and grey winters day.

Date: 2009-02-01 06:12 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/woman_of_/
Sad, but very well done!

Date: 2009-02-01 06:12 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-01 06:22 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-01 06:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bardlover6.livejournal.com
Wonderful. Poor Gwen.

Date: 2009-02-01 06:32 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-01 07:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mizzclara.livejournal.com
Aww this is lovely. Oh Gwen.

Date: 2009-02-01 07:02 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-01 07:48 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] troygirl68.livejournal.com
Ahhh, Ianto; always there supporting Jack.

Sorry to nit pick, but is there some punctuation missing in the first sentence? I wasn't sure after "snow"?

Date: 2009-02-01 07:56 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Tis okay ... missing word! Fixed now.

Thank you :D

Date: 2009-02-01 08:26 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] stargazer60.livejournal.com
Sad, but beautiful.

Date: 2009-02-01 08:57 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-01 09:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trektotorch.livejournal.com
Oh my, another sad one. I'm glad ( I don't mean in a cruel way) that it was Gwen. I don't know how many times we can bury or kill off Ianto. Nicely done for a short fic.

Date: 2009-02-01 10:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
For some reason my muses see sadness with most of these prompts ... but i did put my foot down over it not being Ianto's funeral, they tried, believe me!

Date: 2009-02-01 10:28 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-01 11:16 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-02 09:26 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r2d2antics.livejournal.com
RIP Gwen x

Date: 2009-02-02 10:01 am (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-02 03:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com
Oh wow...that was really sad! REALLY sad. Well done!

Date: 2009-02-02 03:11 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-04 03:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] etmuse.livejournal.com
Awww :(

Date: 2009-02-04 03:12 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-02-05 07:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hab318princess.livejournal.com

lovely drabble

Date: 2009-02-05 07:11 pm (UTC)

Date: 2009-03-20 12:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bandgeek01.livejournal.com
Very good :)


Date: 2009-03-20 02:54 pm (UTC)


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