Flirt!

Jul. 11th, 2008 08:59 pm
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Title: Flirt! Prequel to Kiss!
Author: missthingsplace
Parings/characters: Jack/Ianto.
Disclaimer: I don't own Torchwood or any of the characters ... unfortunately.
Summary: Flirting and dinosaurs
Spoilers: Fragments and tiny tiny ones for Cyberwoman

Rating: pg13

Other parts -

Kiss! 
http://missthingsplace.livejournal.com/26122.html#cutid1
Guilt! http://missthingsplace.livejournal.com/27093.html
Lust! http://missthingsplace.livejournal.com/27153.html
Anger! http://missthingsplace.livejournal.com/28045.html#cutid1
Absolution! http://missthingsplace.livejournal.com/28444.html#cutid1

A/N I have been writing and rewriting this for ages, i've got the the point now where i have decided to just post it. Not completely happy with it, but it's done now! I hope you like.

Ianto stood waiting for the SUV to come into view, his heart pounding in his chest. What he was about to do could cost him his life if he timed it wrong. He was seeing this as his last chance to get into Torchwood Three, he needed to get a job there, his girlfriend was counting on it. It was a life or death situation, he was going to have to take the flirting up a notch. He saw the SUV approaching, straightening his new suit he stepped out in the road in front of it.

*
Jack couldn't believe it when that Jones bloke stepped out in front of his car, his anger grew instantly as he climbed out the car to confront him. Was this guy ever going to get the message, there was no job for him. In another time and place he was have flirted madly with him, well he was hot. Jack ripped into him, telling him to leave Cardiff, to go back to London. He couldn't help but notice the suit as he did, very nice. He turned to walk away, that's when Jones mentioned the Pterodactyl.

*
Ianto breathed a sigh of relief, it worked. He couldn't believe the SUV didn't have any equipment but a tranquiliser to try and catch it. He told him that Torchwood One would have had dinosaur nets. They made to enter the door to the abandoned warehouse, but it flew straight at them, they closed the door leaning on it. Wow, he couldn't believe how gorgeous Jack smelt. 51st century pheromones he was told, whatever that meant. He couldn't believe he was becoming such a flirt around Jack, what on earth was getting into him.

*

Despite himself Jack was beginning to like Jones, Ianto Jones. He opened the door and they ran in, running in opposite directions before meeting up again further into the building. He handed the syringe to him and said he was going to distract it. He couldn't believe it when Jones handed it back saying it knew him, drew out a bar of dark chocolate and started talking to it. Jack tried to sneak up behind it, but he spooked it and it flew upwards, Jack grabbed at it's leg, it took him up with it, oh shit he thought to himself.

*

Ianto watched helplessly as the Pterodactyl flew Jack around the warehouse. He saw Jack finally manage to plunge the syringe into the dinosaur. Then he was falling, falling towards Ianto, Ianto spread his arms to try and catch him, they landed on the floor together. Jack on top of Ianto, before there was time to think the Pterodactyl was falling towards them.

*

Jack rolled them across the floor out of its way, they came to a stop laughing loudly for a few minutes. Jack became very aware that the gorgeous young man was now lying right on top of him, mouths almost touching. He noticed Ianto had gone as quiet as him, he wondered if the same delicious, naughty thoughts were going through his head too. He wanted so much to tilt his head up and capture that mouth.

*

Ianto was a little uneasy to say the least, this was one position he never expected to end up in. It was all very well flirting with the captain as a means to an end, but with him laying under him like that he was very aware of just what Jack was feeling, he could feel it very obviously against his hip. He looked down into the deep blue eyes and wondered what it would be like to kiss him. He almost did, till he came to his senses and got to his feet, rushing off.

*

Jack scrambled up, called out to him stopping him in his tracks. Maybe there was a place for this man in Torchwood Three, he could be useful and would certainly be easy on the eye. He made his decision, told him to report for work in the morning. Also told him he liked the suit as he walked away. He was going to enjoy having Jones, Ianto Jones working for him.

*

Ianto couldn't help the tears that came as he walked away, relief flooded him. He had done it, for Lisa, his lovely girlfriend. She would be saved now. He headed straight back to their flat, desperate to tell her he had succeeded in his mission. He tried to shake the thoughts of how Jack had felt under him and how he had liked it, Lisa didn't need to know that. He had a feeling the flirting was going to continue, and not only on Jack's part.


The End.

Date: 2008-07-11 08:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] totallytracy.livejournal.com
Well, drat, while this was great as usual, I was hoping it would go a little AU and give us some snogging....oh well, it was still lovely as always.

Date: 2008-07-11 08:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
I still not completely happy with it!

Thank you :)

Date: 2008-07-11 08:51 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bassair.livejournal.com
Very good, though not as good as the others. Like I say; very good, though =) Will there be more?

Date: 2008-07-11 08:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
I don't think it is either, but i gave up with it *shrugs*

I might do one more sequel set after Absolution!

Thanks.

Date: 2008-07-11 09:00 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bassair.livejournal.com
!!!!!!YIPEE!!!!!!!!

Date: 2008-07-11 09:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Hopefully it'll turn out okay!

Date: 2008-07-11 10:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shannon730.livejournal.com
I really liked this. Now I'm going to read the others I saw you had listed. I'm new to this comm, pairing, and well, fandom to be honest but I love this pairing and really loved this fic. :)

Date: 2008-07-11 10:09 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Thank you, i hope you enjoy the rest :)

Date: 2008-07-12 01:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bandgeek01.livejournal.com
I thought this was really good :) but then again after a crappy week someone could have Jack saying the word chicken and it'd be brilliant.

But Good job.


Nicole

Date: 2008-07-12 06:31 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-07-12 04:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] thrace-adams.livejournal.com
Oh but I liked this. I thought it was really good. Perfect POVs for both of them.

Date: 2008-07-12 06:32 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-07-12 04:49 am (UTC)
ext_25819: (Doctor *shrug*)
From: [identity profile] ace-of-spades6.livejournal.com
I certainly like this and now to read the rest of them because Im really behind! Excellent BTW ;D

Date: 2008-07-12 06:32 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
I hope you like them.

Thank you.

Date: 2008-07-12 07:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] 2nd-toshiko.livejournal.com
awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....this was sooooo sweet, and just like ianto. you should be very pleased with it!

Date: 2008-07-12 07:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
Thank you Sabrina :)

Date: 2008-07-13 10:59 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] r2d2antics.livejournal.com
Having seen the episode in question this adds to it and im glad you posted it :))

Date: 2008-07-13 11:07 am (UTC)

Date: 2008-09-22 11:12 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] torchwoodfan444.livejournal.com
wonderful, it so completes what we saw on TV (and u know I am such a fan of fics completing thw series).

An since you posted it on July 11th (my birthday)...it practically seems written to my taste....

I like the episode, and that part, among other reasons, for we finally have GDL saying a bit more than one syllable words and placing his hands on his hips (as gorgeous as I BELIEVE he looks when he does that). Loved the part when he proposed to be a watch dog, an assistant, taking care of dry cleaning and becoming a butler.

Date: 2008-09-22 02:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] missthingsplace.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked.

Thank you :D

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